May be a little big too long in the introduction, and too short about Selenna, a few more information about her would be nice -for example, how old is she? wich weapon does she use?-

Nice!

Your review as requested~
2. This is a very interesting concept! I've never been a fan of "making women better than men" roles, in order to boost the role of woman, so this idea is much more appealing. It kind of reminds me of the Samurai X (or Ruroni Kenshin) story! Murderous rage turns to peace loving solitude.
A lot to read, so sparing reviews! lol

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can't wait for more!^ ^

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A really damn good idea!
it's really cool and just makes me want to know more!!
i love the introduction!

Hmm...It's rare to find a goo story where it's matrail artist versus aassassins and it oes not have 24/7 fighting. However this sounds like something I will read. I don't have time now, but I'll check tomorrow.

Now that I gave my opinion on your work, can you give me an opinion on mine. I do stories and both are only at Chapter 1.

KnightFALL - [link]
Ace of Sins - [link]

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Wow.. You really know how to make the reader wanna read more..!

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